Her graceful gesture
Now complete
He held her hand close-by.
She gave with love
Her life complete
His lifeless slumber nigh.
The slightest smile
That settled faintly on his face
The truth of love descried.
She caressed his hand
And kissed his lips
Before his final sigh.
©Alison Jean Hankinson
This is for d’Verse poetics where we are contemplating grace.
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Such an emotive poem.Grace at the end. We can all hope for that.
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I suspect it will be more of a stretcher event for most of us….. but we can hope.
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When the day comes this is how it should pass for all of us… not a rage against the night…
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Grace indeed to be so accompanied as one takes leave of this earth. Beautiful!
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So beautiful. Reminds me of my brother’s passing. He literally said goodbye by reciting the lord’s prayer…and we joined in. 10 seconds after the ‘amen’ he was gone. Loved this.
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Much love to you. XXXX
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh this touches my heart…most especially because in October 2013 I was so so close to being in this situation with my beloved husband, of almost 48 years now. Thankful for every day — and mesmerized by your sensitive writing here.
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Much love to you. XXXXX
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Very nice sound and lovely story.
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Grace even in death! How beautiful!
Dwight
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Grace in death – it will be Mum’s first anniversary next Tuesday. I’ll think of your poem on that day.
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Much love to you. XXXX
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Such a sweet and loving poem! Thank you.
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Such beautiful words with tender emotion.
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So touching. I think it is only right that he felt her lips “before his final sigh.”
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Thankyou. XX
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how absolutely lovely, Alison. May we all end in grace.
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Thankyou.
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So poignant! Truly, a grace-filled write!
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Thank you very much Frank.
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My pleasure, Alison!
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