Spring
He saw her across the room and his heart stopped for a subtle second
She was forbidden fruit from the garden of Eden
A thing of beauty and innocence with an overtone of darkness and despair
He knew that his love could make her brightness soar and bring light into her soul.
Summer
Their love flourished under the summer sun,
He brought warmth into her life
There was colour in her speech and
He offered her a freedom and release
That before she had not known.
There were infinite possibilities
An eternity of love that would nourish
And heal from within and banish
The spectres of solitude and silence
He would be her sanctuary.
Autumn came and darkness cast it’s cloak across their days
His light across the room was dimmed by her shadows
Her innocence tarnished by forgotten promises and the broken bonds of love
He knew that his love had enslaved and condemned her to an eternity of pain.
Their love had died with the embers of the sun.
Winter won.
Alison Jean Hankinson
This is for d’verse
Make Music of Those Words–dVerse MTB
Influence of music through Sonata Form. As a trombonist I have always had music close to my heart and soul. I learned through classical genres and one of my favourite forms is sonata form. If you listen to something like Beethoven’s Pathetique it is very clearly written in sonata form. The first movement is the Exposition and contains the themes in their melodic infancy, they grow through major and minors in the second movement or development and in the Recapitulation, the final movement there is a conclusion with developed references relating to the the early themes. I find Sonata form is a good analogy for life, love and pretty much everything. I tried to capture its essence in the poem through the development and then loss of the relationship and use the season to represent the movement of time.
It sounds to me like a cycle of life; birthed, come of age, mellow and then die. It is a sad sonata😢
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Those last two lines are just beautiful, making a music all their own.
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I like how you structure this on the seasons. The end is so powerful. And thanks for sharing your own story of music.
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This is soo beautifully evocative!
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many thanks.
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Somehow when you project this to the seasons, it feels like there’s a destiny in the end.
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I love the structure of this poem, Alison, and the way you tracked a love affair through the seasons.
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Tis an eternal tale and one that you spun beautifully.
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I too feel the cycle of life or would that be love? You can feel the progression of the relationship. A well spun song.
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Hopelessly romantic this one…appreciate your musical “notes” at the end as well.
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